Portfolio Critique: Johnny Le Newman

Updated on June 14, 2017 in Critique
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1 on June 13, 2017

Nice series Johnny. I particularly like the last one. Maybe when you crop it a bit, the image will get even stronger.

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Thank you Niels!

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I like the series Johnny. Just few notes…

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I don’t like the red umbrella.. it’s a bnw image like all the other pictures of the portfolio. The vertical lines of the buildings are strange… or it’s because of the building architecture itself?

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I like it, maybe i will crop it a bit.

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very moody picture, i like it.

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for me the main subject it’s not so visible.. Maybe if you moved slightly to the left and with a upper position of the camera the subject would have been more visible on the brightest part of the sidewalk. it’s a nice image could be better.

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i like it, maybe a better framing downward would help the composition of the picture.

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this is perfect.

 

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Thank you!

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Photo 1
Love the contrast and the lines. The photo by itself with the color umbrella looks good but as a whole set it throws me off

Photo 2
I like this shot. I wish you were a little closer for the silhouette subject.

Photo 3
Love the shadows and crushed blacks. Very moody

Photo 4
Not sure about this one. Throws me off maybe if you cropped the tree out a little out more focus on the rails for more leading lines. The branches kind of take your eye every where.

Photo 5
Minimalistic Beauty, great shot.

Over all great shots you have there. Keep it up!

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0 on June 14, 2017

I really like the geometry of the first three photos and the leading lines of the second.
I like the mystery of the fourth photograph with long shadows and a black person that comes to the viewer.
The last photo is the best one.

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