Critique- which Version looks best?

Updated on August 23, 2017 in Critique
5 on August 19, 2017

Which works best? Feedback on why wouldbe SO appreciated! 

 
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3 on August 21, 2017

To me, the middle one. It has an extra layer that actualy frames the bus and provides context.  I would even add a little more space to the left. Also I like how the head of the guy in the front is composed and fits in the wheel nicely. Yet the composition is clean enough and there is a spiral beginning at the top, going left down to the bottom left corner, than to the right to the guy and then to the left to the reader. Nice one.

 

on August 21, 2017

For me, the second one looks better but its lacks of contrast 

on August 22, 2017

Well, isn’t “the middle one” and “the second one” actually the same one? 🙂

 

on August 22, 2017

Thanks to you both. I appreciate it! I was wondering if the first one, with the Orange line of the street mirroring the colour of the shirt and the sign above the rider made for a stronger photo.

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0 on August 23, 2017

Geoff, I was going to say the 3rd because personally I like tighter crops ( but that’s just me 🙂  )BUT  on second glance I really like the 2nd, I agree with Jakub and like how the guys head fits into the wheel well. Love all the faces and heads, really fun shot!

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