If i’d shot this, i’d struggle to entirely reject it as there’s a few interesting characters (in good focus) and there’s activity and life to the situation with some atmosphere. But i think the framing is too low and not close enough, which i know is often the way of a zone focussed grab shot. The smoke and the strip light adds to the shot. The quite large area of solid dark at the base doesn’t add anything imo and unbalances the picturr overall. A keeper for your archive but not a show-er i’d suggest.