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Updated on September 8, 2017 in Critique
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Love the dull look in her face. Because of this you have no idea what she is up to with this knife and stick in her hand. 
What I would have done differently is maybe go a little closer ( crop out more of the background) and come to her eye level. 

But over all, i like the picture. !!!

 

on September 8, 2017

Thanks Steef! Appreciate your feed back! 

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Wow, that’s a haunting scene! I love it! I think Steef is right about the background- it doesn’t contribute much to the shot. If there was a way to shoot it where the background was much plainer, I think the girl in her pretty dress holding these weapons is enough of a statement. On the other hand, if there were a group of children playing in the background, much more prominently than now, it could provide a good contrast between happy playing children and this serious haunting child. I don’t know I’m just glad you captured this girl. The mood is wonderful.

on September 8, 2017

Thank so much Geoff, really appreciate the feedback. I agree with both you and Steef about the backround, I was actually much closer to her and started to walk away when I saw what she had , I clicked  the shutter  Is there a way to blur the backround in LR? 

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