Love the dull look in her face. Because of this you have no idea what she is up to with this knife and stick in her hand.
What I would have done differently is maybe go a little closer ( crop out more of the background) and come to her eye level.
But over all, i like the picture. !!!
Wow, that’s a haunting scene! I love it! I think Steef is right about the background- it doesn’t contribute much to the shot. If there was a way to shoot it where the background was much plainer, I think the girl in her pretty dress holding these weapons is enough of a statement. On the other hand, if there were a group of children playing in the background, much more prominently than now, it could provide a good contrast between happy playing children and this serious haunting child. I don’t know I’m just glad you captured this girl. The mood is wonderful.