Hi, My name is Crystal and I am new here. Looking forwards to learning what I can from Street Club Winter School!
Thank you in advance for critiquing!
Basic advice: show all three colour or all b&w, have all three in either 3:2 or 4:3 or 16:9. Picture #1 hard to see whats going on, could use a fill flash. The sepia toning is an odd choice. Picture #2 get closer/lower, shallow depth of field, as it is a boring pointless picture. Picture #3 too constrained by the 16:9 framing, maybe better to position yourself slighly behind him, overlooking both the artist and the artwork. Dull, flat light would be improved with flash and diffuser (or go b&w no flash if you are closer and can work with the shapes/forms in monochrome).