Hi everybody new here i m open to receive all critiques

Updated on November 24, 2017 in Critique
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Hi everybody, I’m Diego 27 yo from Italy.
I’m interested in street and documentary photo, I worked with a photojournalistic agency for 1 year, but the journal’s situation in Italy is not good enough to give a place to you, young photographer. For that i decided to move in Australia Melbourne, in the end of November i will be there.
Street photography for my is like a vent for the eyes satisfies my curiosity.
Thank you everyone wants to reply this post.

on November 13, 2017

If the lady was off centre and to the right of the shot it may remove the large darker area on the right hand side and emphasise her curious gaze actually across the whole image frame. May i suggest a conversion to mono / B&W it could offer a film noir feel

on November 24, 2017

I think I would have shifted the framing to the left and backed up more to include more of that golden thing above her head and more of the visual chaos on the left side of the frame.

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0 on November 10, 2017

The lady looks interesting but everything else does not say anything, the photo would have been better if the frame would have caught more of the lady, and it would have been even better if you had taken the photo while the lady noticed you taking the picture.Sometimes the reaction that people have when they see somebody taking their photos is what makes the photo interesting.

http://juanortegaphotography.com

 

 

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0 on November 21, 2017

Hii

I am also new here

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0 on November 21, 2017

me too…

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0 on November 23, 2017

Hii

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