Critique:I want to know your opinion about this photo!!!

Updated on August 25, 2017 in Critique
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1 on August 22, 2017

Hi, for me nothing pops out, the bicycle take all the light and it attracts attention from the frame,

but I like the scene and the lighting, do you have more angle?

on August 22, 2017

Hi, for me nothing pops out, the bicycle take all the light and it attracts attention from the frame,

but I like the scene and the lighting, do you have more angle?

From MatanDrori

No more angles. 

The bike I added purposely in this picture. It has the harsh light and hard lines in it, while the rest of the picture is moody, dark and almost looks like a painting. I just like this juxtaposition of hardness and softness in the shot. 

Thanks for your critique @MatanDrori !!

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2 on August 22, 2017

It’s not a bad photo, but looking at it I am not quite sure what the main subject is. I like the line that draws the attention to the guy on the left. However I think this would work better if the shot was horizontal and perhaps if there was one more person on the left of the frame and in focus. And also the tower kind of disturbs the color harmony of the lower half of the frame (pink + brown + yellow), so again. Horizontal would be better and I would crop it right under the lantern.

 

on August 23, 2017

Hi Steef!

For me,  I think it would be a more powerful shot if you crop the lights from the top of the building, then you just have the beautiful glowing light on the street, with the cool lines of the bike and the mysterios man walking away?

on August 23, 2017

Thank you all for the critique!!!

 

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0 on August 25, 2017

My eye is drawn to the tower, but the focus is on the bike.

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