Critique please

Updated on September 12, 2017 in Critique
9 on September 5, 2017
 
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1 on September 5, 2017

I like the situation, the distance between the orthodox and the woman, the “like” prayer position of the woman, but something is missing, I didn’t get the story.

What made you press the button? 

 

on September 7, 2017

I saw the man coming to our direction, the contrast of the 2 characters.

and what was amazing for me is that my girlfriend, got tired of being photgraphed a moment before the man passed next to her.

and the story is for the viewer to decide.

As you know @MatanDrori the topic of religion and the religious people as contrast to the rest of the population is a hot topic, to say the least. but still everyone sees something else no?

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1 on September 5, 2017

In addition to what MatanDrori said, I think the PP could be better.  The photo appears very washed out and overexposed to my eye.

on September 7, 2017

thank you ! I will take a second look

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1 on September 7, 2017

I just saw the photo on your Instagram, the color version looks better.   

on September 10, 2017

I agree with previous comments…try to get a better/sharper contrast next time…the interrelation between the two subjects holds though in my oppinion…thanks for sharing…

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0 on September 11, 2017

Really like the gesture of both caracters. The gap between both kind of bothers me, maybe a second earlier, but overall intreguing.

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1 on September 12, 2017

I like the picture!
Love the gestures! It creates a story that the girl seems to know what the Jewish? man is going to grab out of his pocket! Also, like the fact that the girl dressed in bright clothes is in a dark part of the shot and the man who’s wearing dark clothes in is a bright part of the picture.

Nice shot!!

on September 12, 2017

Thank u friend!
I appreciate the critique!!

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