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Updated on September 18, 2017 in Critique
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The expressions are wonderful! I do find the upper right and left backgrounds a bit distactng. I like seeing the money, but I want to make a stronger connection to the kids some how. I love how she looks like she is horsing around with her tough-guy expression, but the boy is clearly sincerely troubled. Nice.

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3 on September 18, 2017

Hi All…first attempt for me.  What do you think of this one?  Newlywed at his wedding recption. Cheers, Alan

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Hi Alan,

You want to start at the forum’s Home page and click on “Click here to start your new topic.”

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Oops…thanks Ryan

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I like the contrast between the two expressions 

but for me too, something is missing with the connection to the subjects ! 

 

nice work !

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